Friday, October 29, 2010

Impulse

Two young men and a donkey are on a stake out waiting for a suspected killer to return.

Jim:  How long do you think this will be?

Jeff: How ever long it takes for some one to kill a person hide their body and get back.

Jim: So how long is that?

Jeff: I don't know, now shut up!

Jim: Dang

Jeff: Shh, here he comes.

Jim: Huh?

Jeff: What?

Jim: What?

Jeff: Huh?

Jim: What?

Jeff: Shh!

Jim: What?

Jeff: Huh?

Jim: Huh?

Donkey: What?

Jim: Huh?

Jeff: Shh!

Donkey: What?

Jim: What?

Jeff: Quite!!!!!

Jim: Wow Jeff way to give away our position.

1 comment:

  1. Action: Want to find out who the killer is and when he will return.

    Conflict: Jim wants to know how long it will take and Jeff doesn't know, this starts an argument.

    Event: When Jim, Jeff and Donkey start bickering and it basically goes south for there!

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